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Monday, May 4, 2015

The Breeze

So this woman is on her balcony and feels a breeze of spring and she wants to live in the moment and have a good night. so she asks her husband to come home early so they can do something. When he gets home she doesn't know what she wants to so, she doesn't know what she wants throughout the night everything doesn't feel right or go as she planned. She wanted the picnic she felt it was getting late, he wanted the movies and already bought the ticket she said no. sex in the park couldn't happen. They went to the bar with there friends. The woman was just confused she wanted to find it but with no it to it and her man was trying to accommodate all her decisions.
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  1. DimitrisMay 9, 2015 at 7:38 AM

    What I understand is that in the beginning of the story, Sarah felt spring breeze and she wanted to go somewhere to relive the moment. So she decides to call her husband to come home early and when he finally arrives, she doesn't have an idea what she wants to do. That was one mistake she made, if she had thought about what she wanted to do, there wouldn't be any problem. But yet again, there wouldn't be any conflict in the story and probably would have been a simple story. When I was reading the "Breeze" I honestly didn't the things the couple were doing was all scenarios she thought of until it was discuss in class.

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    1. UnknownMay 10, 2015 at 4:13 PM

      Definitely a headache of a story but good in itself. As I read I thought the feel breeze started it too

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