Welcome to the blog for Prof. John Talbird's English 201 class. The purpose of this site is two-fold: 1) to continue the conversations we start in class (or to start conversations BEFORE we get to class) and 2) to practice our writing/reading on a weekly basis in an informal forum.

Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Thoughts about "The Breeze"

As I was reading "The breeze" I had to continuously go back and reread paragraphs. The story kept jumping from different time periods/areas I believe Sarah was acting very difficult. If she didn't want to continue going to the movies and eating from the neighborhood deli, she should have came up with another idea. She didn't know what she wanted.I think it would have been better off if she had just stated she wanted to explore the town. It's not fair to her husband when she burst out into emotional temper tantrum and he's just thinking she's fine with doing the regular. I think there was also a part when they attempted to have sex but her husband was not in the mood or turned on. In this story, I also noticed that a breeze was brought up more than once. They talked about it in the subway while waiting for the train, I believe. It also came up again when they were at the Italian restaurant.

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