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Thursday, April 30, 2015

The breeze


The breeze was a bit of a love story about Sarah and jay couple that seems to have communication issue to me because At first I didn't see why Sarah couldn't just tell jay what she was thinking about what she really wanted to do, I wondered if she hesitated because she figured he would judge her but he's in a relationship with you, he should be happy for the fact of UR imagination and spice. I got deeper in the story and I came to my own conclusion that Sarah wanted jay to be more adventurous, she wanted him to be the spontaneous one and when they are having a picnic just look at her and want her intimately. I feel like jay and Sarah spark of intimacy was gone and they really didn't show one another how much they love each other. She got sick of their date night being just a movie all the time, Sarah wanted jay to be romantic for once and want her the way she he either once did or show her that she was still attractive to him. Sarah seem to feel lonely around jay because he didn't express the affection she was looking for. 
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  1. DimitrisMay 1, 2015 at 8:55 PM

    When I was reading the story, I noticed that when Sarah told Jay she doesn't want to watch a movie. And asked him does he want to do something else and Jay asks the same question and she doesn't say what she wants. There's seems to be a communication problem the two because one person wants to do something else besides watching a movie but doesn't say anything. I also noticed that throughout the story, Sarah wants to feel the spring breeze.

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