“Always put the toilet seat down damnit!” Martha screams.
“But that’s why I have you baby” Pete slowly replied while
scratching his belly. Closing the lid
with a sigh, Martha makes her way to the living room.
“Do you always have
to play video games with your butt buddies on Xbox?” Martha said.
“Every time you nag me like this, yah” he replies.
“Found your other
sock by the window by the way” she said.
“Go squeeze it on a bottle, I am sure there is enough sweat
to hydrate us for tonight” he replies.
Hot was the forecast for that day.
It was a perfect day to go out.
Judy calls Martha on her cell and screams “ARE YOU READY FOR
TONIGHT? WOOOT!” Knowing she was going
to call, Martha had prepared her reply, “I was born ready.”
“Love you, can’t wait to see you and your outfit tonight”
Judy replies and then hangs up.
“Man, she’s annoying as hell” Pete states.
“Nooo, she’s not annoying, you’re annoying” she angrily replies. Obscure clothing is not what’s “in” in the
club and this dissatisfies Pete. Pete
puts on his jeans and he was ready.
Questioning himself in the mirror he finally says “eh whatever, I
already have a girlfriend.” Reluctantly,
Pete goes into the bedroom to see what she had put on.
Short, short, short, was all that came to
Petes mind but he says “You look great baby!” Tonight they were going to a club
in the city where a famous DJ that all the girls love was going to play. Unknowingly however, the place was going to
be overcrowded because it was teen night.
Voila! And just like that, they had made it to the club in his 1998
Camry. “Wow, I can’t believe how crowded
this place is!” Judy says while laughing
like a hyena. Xclusive was the Dj’s
name and was clearly highlighted throughout the club. Yep, this was the night they were looking for
in the end, it was everything the girls wanted!
Zipping through the streets, they finally get come home and Pete lets
out a sigh of relief that another night has come to a close.
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I thought this was a little fun to be honest, however I also felt that it makes your story a little too restricted. I do not feel like you have the ability to make many stories with this type of restriction.
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